Sunday, 8 May 2016

Hanmer hot pools

As I wander into the entrance I smell the rotten egg pool.
Hungry children splash with energy.
Colourful water slides cry with delight.
Drenching water covers the floor, “Watch out, don’t slip”
Waterfall fizzes up like a soda, then it SLAPS the water.
The lazy river pulls and pushes me along as it twirls in circles.

1 comment:

  1. Great job Paisley.
    I love your writting.
    It's so cool how you said "rotten egg pool" and "waterfall fizzes up like soda"
    Your such an amazing writer.
    Good job Paisley 😀
    Abbey.

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